Nice job Josephine, I like how you put a photo of yourself in the middle. This reminded me about the explosion box I got for Christmas except it was full of chocolates and there was a smaller box in that and a smaller box in that! Maybe you could have explained how it works, I know but some people might not. Why did you put what you did in the box? Keep up the good work,bye.
Kia Ora Josephine My name is Olivia from Belfast School, I really like the way you showed pictures of it. Did you think about adding more detail to your blog post. Maybe next time you could double check to see if you need to add any more Capital Letters.
Nice job Josephine, I like how you put a photo of yourself in the middle. This reminded me about the explosion box I got for Christmas except it was full of chocolates and there was a smaller box in that and a smaller box in that! Maybe you could have explained how it works, I know but some people might not. Why did you put what you did in the box? Keep up the good work,bye.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Josephine My name is Olivia from Belfast School,
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you showed pictures of it.
Did you think about adding more detail to your blog post.
Maybe next time you could double check to see if you need to add any more Capital Letters.