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Monday, 24 February 2020

Fun Run

I heard the police man comforting us and encouraging  us to carry on and to never give up.
I heard my heart beating rapidly like it was ready to quit on me.


I saw the waves brushing up against the rocky wall.
I saw my friends running ultra fast past all the cars. 


I smelt the saltiness of the sea brush up against my nostrils as I inhaled a deep breath.


I smelt the sweat dripping down my face and the icy water from my friends freezing water bottle. 


I tasted the polluted air engulfing my lungs as I caught every last breath. 


I tasted my dry lips begging for water and the nervousness in my stomach.


I felt the cool breeze pushing up against my skin and the discomfort of my sweat dripping down
my exhausted face. 


I felt the butterflies in my stomach and my dehydrated legs ready to fall as I approached the finish line. 


I wondered if I was past the halfway mark and if I was last. I also wondered if we were allowed to
jump into the icy splattering water.


2 comments:

  1. Fantastic writing Josephine - love how you used all your senses to describe your fun run. Keep up the great work.

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  2. Great writing on your fun run Josephine. Keep up the good job! :)

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